Thursday, December 6, 2012

Cover Letter


Kaylee Christner         

7 December 2012

Engl 1100-71

E-Portfolio Cover Letter

            With my first semester of college, there have been many new; yet stressful experiences. From memorizing my route around campus, to writing my first paper for English 1100; I have grown in many aspects including my writing abilities. I came into English 1100 not having the slightest clue what to expect; hoping for the best, but preparing for the worst. One of my biggest strengths would be crafting a hook, which I used as much as possible in all of my projects. One thing I have improved on is incorporating my voice into my work. Until project two, I had been disconnected from my voice; but through peer review and my own revisions, I have come to rediscover my voice. I still believe I am and probably always will struggle with time management. Next semester I will attempt to finish my assignments on time and I may even carry around a planner to help with managing my time.

            For my final project, I chose to revise project one. I feel that I have grown most in my writing abilities since then and that I would be able to best revise it. I reordered a few paragraphs in the order I thought would best fit my revised project; placing the paragraph about the childhood of David Pelzer directly after the paragraph about what the signs of child abuse are, because the paragraph about David provided examples of some of the signs of child abuse. I also went into more detail about problems in cognitive, language, and academic abilities focusing on; abused children often have little or no reasoning skills, big gaps in their knowledge on topics presented, little ability to learn as much, and they fail to perform their best For a pathos effect, I named the child, Sophia, in the abuse scenario, to pull further at the heart strings of the reader.

Project One Revision


Kaylee Christner         

7 December 2012

Engl 1100-71

E-Portfolio Revision Project One

Unexplained Bruises

            As a kindergarten teacher begins her Friday morning lesson, she notices a child is absent from school for the third unexplained day in a row. The child arrives to school an hour late; she is wearing a green dress, long enough to hide the bruises, scrapes, and burns; the same dress that she wore on Monday.  There is yet another bruise on her forearm and scrape under her right eye; she says she ran into a door, the same excuse that she used last week. The teacher hesitates, but continues her lesson. Although her smile portrays a simple life of happiness, the child endures countless hours of abuse at home. Over the weekend, Sophia experiences what seems like an eternity of abuse. There is no escaping the abuse and the child is killed. Monday morning, the teacher is informed of the weekend’s events. In this scenario, the teacher noticed signs of abuse, but did not act on her suspicions. Now imagine the same scenario, but with a different outcome. The teacher notices the signs of abuse, and acts on her suspicions. The teacher reports the abuse, the case is investigated, and the child is removed from the abusive parent(s) and the abuse is ended. The United States loses five children each day due to abuse-related injuries (www.childhelp.org). That is five too many. If child abuse is suspected, child abuse should be reported. School-age children spend eight hours a day, five days a week in a classroom setting. Teachers and faculty members should be trained in recognizing the signs of child abuse and what to do when abuse is suspected. This training should take place when teachers are first employed and once every five year after employment. If teachers and faculty members are trained and the abuse is reported as soon as it is noticed; children suffering from abuse would be removed from the dangerous home environment. If this preventative action is enforced by the school system, child abuse can be stopped in the academic setting.       

                        Teachers and faculty members should be trained in recognizing the signs of abuse and what to do if abuse is suspected. Teachers should be trained upon initial employment and once every five years after. This training should take place during the summer or winter at least two weeks before the start of school, because during that time the school is vacated due to summer or winter break. The training should last three days; the first day reviewing the signs of abuse, the second day reviewing how to report, and the third day a test of 50 questions on the information. Now the question is; how will it be decided if a teacher has passed the test? My personal suggestion would be that teachers must score at least 40 out of 50 to pass the test, and the test can be taken as many times as needed. The first step in preventing child abuse is to recognize when it is happening. For that to happen, teachers and faculty members need to know the signs of abuse. Some signs of child abuse include; sudden changes in behavior or school performance, unexplained physical injuries, unexplained drop in school attendance, lack of personal care or hygiene, coming to school early or staying late, frequent absences, and lack of appropriate clothing for weather conditions (childwelfare.gov). Any one of these signs may mean nothing at all, but if two or more are noticed in a single student, abuse should be suspected. For example, if a child’s school performance drops significantly, it may not mean the child is being abused. The child may be suffering from a horrible divorce. On the other hand, if a child with perfect attendance misses three days of school with no explanation and returns to school with an unexplained broken bone, bruise, or burn; the child may be suffering from abuse. Of course, kids are active, and falls and accidents are prone to happen, but if a child comes to class dirty, in clothing unsuitable for weather conditions, with neglected hygiene, multiple bruises, and complaints of being hungry, chances are the child is being abused and the abuse needs to be reported as soon as possible. There are some instances in which the abuse is reported, but not resolved; as in the case of David Pelzer.

A Child Called “IT” is based on true events that occurred in David Pelzer’s childhood. David is taken away from his abusive, alcoholic mother and is set free from the pain and suffering that he endured for what seemed like an eternity. “My long sleeve shirt has more holes than Swiss cheese. It’s the same shirt I’ve worn for about two years. Mother has me wear it every day as her way to humiliate me. My pants are just as bad, and my shoes have holes in the toes. I can wiggle my big toe out of one of them” (Pelzer 8). As stated earlier, coming into class in clothes unsuitable for weather conditions and appearing dirty or uncared for are two signs of child abuse and teachers should recognize this as so. David Pelzer is the outcast of Thomas Edison Elementary School. The other children taunt David, often calling him “PelzerSmellzer” (35). There is nothing wrong with David; he is just like any other child. The only difference is, David is abused and neglected by his alcoholic mother. Teachers notice the abuse, and at first they do not act on their suspicions. The abuse is reported once, and a social worker comes to the Pelzer residence to investigate. David’s mother cleans the house, and puts on an act for the social worker, making the accusations of abuse seems untrue. “Mother told him how David often struck and scratched himself to get attention, since the recent birth of his new brother, Russell.” (32). The case is dropped and the abuse is continued. The first mistake teachers made was letting their suspicions die down after the case was dropped, while David was still coming to school with new, unexplained injuries and in the same ragged clothing. Nothing changed; David’s mother just started aiming her blows where they could be easily covered. Teachers’ should have continued in their pursuit of reporting the obvious abuse that was taking place. After a while, the abuse spirals out of control. David’s mother stabs, burns, and forces David to eat the contents of his siblings’ diaper. On March 5, 1973 the school nurse calls David in for the “normal” routine. She examines David’s body and writes down information on the different scars, burns, and bruises (8). The morning ends with David’s mother losing custody of David.  “I lean back against the seat. A reflection from the sun hits my eyes. I turn away from the rays as a single tear runs down my cheek. “I’m free?”” (13) He escaped from the abuse, because the faculty members at Thomas Edison Elementary School supported David through the process of reporting the abuse. In this scenario, the child was able escape from the abuse, because the faculty members and teachers were educated in recognizing the signs of child abuse and took preventative action by reporting the abuse. Now imagine the same scenario, but with a different outcome. The teachers and faculty members are not educated in recognizing the signs of child abuse and the abuse is not reported.  The story depicted in Concrete Angel by Martina McBride is a great example of what can happen if child abuse isn’t reported. “The teacher wonders, but she doesn’t ask . . . A statue stands in a shaded place, an angel girl with an upturned face. A name is written on a polished rock, a broken heart that the world forgot.” In this scenario, child abuse is suspected, but the teacher does not report the abuse, resulting in the death of the child. The deaths caused by abuse-related injury have increased by two children in one decade. The United States loses five children each day due to abuse-related injuries (www.childhelp.org). That is five too many. If child abuse is suspected, child abuse should be reported.

If a teacher fails to report child abuse, the abuse will continue and the child will suffer mentally, academically, and socially. Child abuse causes important regions of the brain to fail to form properly, resulting in impaired development. Abused children often have little or no reasoning skills, big gaps in their knowledge on topics presented, little ability to learn as much, and they fail to perform their best (ehis.ebscohost). If a child’s brain fails to develop properly, the child may not be able to retain information and will not be able to excel academically. If a child cannot perform age appropriate activities, the child will fall behind academically and socially. The National Survey of Child and Adolescent Well-being (NSCAW) found that children who are victims of abuse and neglect tend to score lower than average on measures of cognitive capacity, language development, and academic achievement (www.childwelfare.gov). Typically, a developing child tends to achieve language fluency around age three. However, children who live in an environment filled with trauma, neglect, stress, or abuse may experience abnormal physical changes in the structure of the brain which interfere with normal language development. Abuse causes levels of stress hormones such as cortisol to increase; those hormones "...wash over the tender brain like acid" (earlychildhoodnews.com). In some abused or neglected children vital areas of the brain appear like black holes-dark, undeveloped, and inactive (earlychildhoodnews.com). Training teachers and faculty members will benefit the children that have been abused or have been affected by abuse. When the abuse is reported and the case of abuse is found true, the child suffering from abuse will be removed from the dangerous home environment and will be able to learn the same as their classmates; meaning there will be little gaps in knowledge, putting all children on the same learning level.

             The rise in deaths caused by abuse-related injury is becoming a national epidemic. My senior year of high school, I spent two months interning at an elementary school to receive credit for graduation. The story of Sophia in the introduction is a true story that I experienced during my internship. The child abuse was reported and the child was removed from the abusive environment. The teachers and faculty were trained in recognizing the signs of child abuse and at the first sign of abuse, it was reported.  To lower the number of deaths caused by abuse-related injury, every educational institution should require teachers and faculty members to be educated in the signs of child abuse and how report the abuse. For example, the Wisconsin public school board ensures all employees receive training provided by the Department of Public Instruction within six months of initial hiring and at least every five years thereafter (dpi.wi.gov). Ohio has also adopted this requirement for all elementary, middle, and high school faculty (education.ohio.gov). If every state adopted this as a requirement for public school employment, and teachers and faculty members reported every case of child abuse, the death toll would plummet. Now, the questions are; who will pay for the training and will teachers be paid for this training?

            Michigan State University (MSU) conducted a study that compared the costs associated with child abuse to the costs associated with child abuse prevention services. The costs of child abuse were estimated at 823 million dollars a year and the costs of prevention services at 43 million dollars a year (msu.edu). Not only would prevention services decrease the number of children who are being abused, it would also decrease the amount of money that is being spent dealing with child abuse. The money saved could be used in paying for the training sessions for teachers and school faculty members. Teachers should also be paid the same they would for a day of classes. Teachers will be paid for the three days of training and testing, but will not be paid for retesting. Now, the question is; who will teach the class? Teachers and faculty members who have completed the class can apply to teach the class for new employees. Why continue to spend so much on child abuse related injuries when you can save more than half a million dollars by simply preventing it?

In conclusion, school-age children spend eight hours a day, five days a week in a classroom setting; which places preventing child abuse in the hands of teachers and faculty members. If teachers and faculty members are trained and the abuse is reported as soon as it is noticed; children suffering from abuse would be removed from the dangerous home environment and would be able to learn all the material, attend school on a regular basis, and possess the ability to excel in the academic setting. If this preventative action is enforced by the school system, child abuse can be stopped in the academic setting. Why would we pass up an opportunity to put an end to such a malicious thing as child abuse? Why haven’t policies like these been put into place already? The time is now, we need to come together and convince school systems that these classes must be mandatory.  


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